{"id":1085,"date":"2010-02-26T16:49:41","date_gmt":"2010-02-26T15:49:41","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/labyrinthiques.fr\/?p=1085"},"modified":"2013-02-24T18:43:16","modified_gmt":"2013-02-24T17:43:16","slug":"le-ver-a-soi-2-le-cocon","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/labyrinthiques.fr\/?p=1085","title":{"rendered":"Le ver \u00e0 soi &#8212; 2. le cocon"},"content":{"rendered":"<p style=\"text-align: justify;\">Voici donc la seconde version du po\u00e8me. Outre son passage (peut-\u00eatre provisoire) \u00e0 une forme plus classique, alexandrins et rimes, le po\u00e8me s&rsquo;est d\u00e9fait de quelques d\u00e9fauts : clich\u00e9s et expressions attendus (\u00ab\u00a0ombre au miroir\u00a0\u00bb, \u00ab\u00a0p\u00e9tales \u00e0 peines \u00e9clos\u00a0\u00bb, \u00ab\u00a0source qui t\u2019\u00e9veille\u00a0\u00bb), pr\u00e9sence trop pr\u00e9matur\u00e9e du pronom personnel \u00e0 la deuxi\u00e8me personne, etc.. Il s&rsquo;est en revanche enrichi d&rsquo;euphonies, d&rsquo;ambigu\u00eft\u00e9s et sa chute a \u00e9t\u00e9 nuanc\u00e9e.<\/p>\n<blockquote>\n<p>Sans d\u00e9faire ce qui au hasard appartient<br \/> Sans \u00e9mousser l\u2019ombre du scintillant doloir<br \/> Sans r\u00e9duire la pluie \u00e0 son souffle d\u2019\u00e9cume<br \/> Sans alourdir l\u2019inutile d\u2019un fardeau de plumes<br \/> Sans ajouter au tard le fard du nonchaloir<\/p>\n<p>Prends l\u2019encre \u00e0 l\u2019endroit d\u2019o\u00f9 s\u2019\u00e9coule ce qui vient<\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Voici donc la seconde version du po\u00e8me. Outre son passage (peut-\u00eatre provisoire) \u00e0 une forme plus classique, alexandrins et rimes, le po\u00e8me s&rsquo;est d\u00e9fait de quelques d\u00e9fauts : clich\u00e9s et expressions attendus (\u00ab\u00a0ombre au miroir\u00a0\u00bb, \u00ab\u00a0p\u00e9tales \u00e0 peines \u00e9clos\u00a0\u00bb, \u00ab\u00a0source qui t\u2019\u00e9veille\u00a0\u00bb), pr\u00e9sence trop pr\u00e9matur\u00e9e du pronom personnel \u00e0 la deuxi\u00e8me personne, etc.. Il s&rsquo;est [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":3222,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"quote","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[7,350],"tags":[486,296],"class_list":["post-1085","post","type-post","status-publish","format-quote","has-post-thumbnail","hentry","category-ecrits","category-poesie-ecrits","tag-poesie","tag-work-in-progress","post_format-post-format-quote"],"jetpack_featured_media_url":"https:\/\/labyrinthiques.fr\/wp-content\/uploads\/2010\/02\/vers3.png","_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/labyrinthiques.fr\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1085","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/labyrinthiques.fr\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/labyrinthiques.fr\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/labyrinthiques.fr\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/labyrinthiques.fr\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcomments&post=1085"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"https:\/\/labyrinthiques.fr\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1085\/revisions"}],"wp:featuredmedia":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/labyrinthiques.fr\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/media\/3222"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/labyrinthiques.fr\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fmedia&parent=1085"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/labyrinthiques.fr\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcategories&post=1085"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/labyrinthiques.fr\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Ftags&post=1085"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}